AdurnaNagra's movie Reviews on Newgrounds

[STEAMBOAT WILLIE PUBLIC DOMAIN]

The title card was better than the rest of it.
Although, for making this in a rushed time, I wasn't expecting the world.

[Steamboat Willy 2: Mickey Vapes]

WOAH! I CAN'T BELIEVE DIDNEE WOULD LET MICK VAPE FAT CLOUDS!!!

Bruno08 responds:

ummmm it litterqly says not by disney r you stupid??????

[Homer V-R]

This is just the normal progression; it is wildly more common than not.

With a simple structure, this was great.

[Cancer Ward Funking]

The "Ugh" sold it for me.

Before that it was alright.

[JAWBREAKER]

I loved the scoring the most. It reminds me of Blade Runner synths. It has it's gross and creepy vibes, and I LOVE IT.

[Goanimate to Flash]

Alright.
I barely understand the script:
Why does he start kicking him?
Why does the man call the boy a pussy?
There's so little to gleam any information from, so it just leads to being short, unfunny, and annoying, aside from all the criticisms about GoAnimate (style,voice, etc...).

Are you trying to make a statement that you're starting to use flash?

While I applaud you making your way to flash (if that's the intended message), I think something a bit more fleshed out and/or personal would be more fitting; I'd take an animatic or storyboard with your voice over it.

The message might be more fitting for a text post, but let's work with what we have:
-make this a part of a longer animation, expand the ideas here
-flesh out the designs to be less "Family Guy", and more you
-do a bit more animating, more time and work will make your skills improve

As is? I can't say that watching this was worth any part of my time.